Fiction , Consensual Sex, Female / Girl, Foot or shoe fetish, Girls / Female, Lesbian, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Romance, Spanking, Young Posted: 2012-10-1217:58:48 Report Author’s infos Gender: Male Age: Secret Location: Magical Box Introduction: The dream continues Hello readers and welcome to Part 2 of ‘Preteen Dream’, a story which follows the sexual discoveries of two 10 year old girls on a sleepover. It is highly advisable you read the first part that is located at this link; This story is also complete fiction and I do not condone paedophilia in real life whatsoever, fantasy is however, fine with me. Enjoy the story and feel free to leave constructive feedback. I always reply to comments and PM’s and I will happily take on board any advice given if it’s constructive. There has been no proof reading done on this story so mistakes are likely, I apologize for this however, I can only work on my stories for 1 hour every Saturday so to avoid making people wait another few weeks for this story, I am taking the risk. Please PM me if you want to help proof reading. NOTICE: I am also looking for someone to help me proofreading my stories and highlighting any errors before publication to XNXX. My work hours make it difficult for me to write and proof read stories in a short amount of time so any help would be appreciated. If you're interested then PM me on XNXX forums. ___________________________________________________________________________________ I woke to the dancing flames crackling in the fireplace. My eyes parted slowly open, the light intense and dazzling so much that I had to squint my eyes as they adjusted to the piercing light. I hazily looked around the room trying to gather my thoughts together. My body felt warm and I could feel a steady flow of breathe against my thigh. It tickled my skin and for a moment, I was content in just letting the breath caress my body. I however, slowly looked down to see Charlotte, my best friend sleeping peacefully across my lap, her head resting on the top part of my thigh. I smiled to myself as I watched her sleep there. Her face looked adorable and I could not help but giggle slightly at how peaceful she looked. Her body was radiating a gentle heat that mixed with the flames smothered my body in a blanket like fashion. I gently moved my arm and stroked her soft brown hair gently, feeling the smooth hairs run like a gentle stream through the gap in my fingers. Her hair felt amazing through my touch and I felt my heart race slightly. I felt her stir slightly on my lap and she moaned slightly as her eyes began to flutter slightly as she stirred. She opened her eyes slowly and looked up at me with a blank expression for a moment. She stared at me and I watched her lips curl into a pleasant smile as she laid their on my lap looking up at me. “Heya” I whispered in a soft and gentle voice. “Hey..” she replied back, smiling at me from her resting point. “You look really cute like that,” I said as I giggled in the seat. “Thanks” she said as she sat up and moved her body to sit next to mine on the seat. She curled up against me and rested her head on my shoulder as she closed her eyes again. “I’m starving, when we going to eat?” she asked slowly as she rested against me. “I don’t know, let’s go and ask my daddy” I responded as I pushed her upright. She pouted slightly and jabbed my ribs gently, which caused my body to arch as I jumped from the tickle. Charlotte began to laugh at me as she scrambled up off the chair and I immediately lunged at her and tried to grab her. She evaded me and I fell to the floor on my front and off the chair. I let out a squeal as the carpet burned the front of my body slightly but luckily did not leave a mark. Charlotte helped me up of the floor and gave me a gentle hug. I could feel the naked skin against the front of my body. I shortly felt her pussy brush against mine and I felt tingle as feelings fluttered up my spine. I rasped a quick intake of breathe as I felt pleasure wave throughout my body. I heard Charlotte also let out a soft and quiet moan and I grinned slightly. I let go of her and stood there simply smiling at her, we just stared at each other for several minutes in front of the fires warm glow. I sighed as I turned around to begin walking to door when I suddenly felt a sharp slap on my bum. I let out a loud shriek as I felt the skin on my bum begin to tingle with soreness. I turned around to see Charlotte running for cover behind the furniture in the room. I laughed as I chased after her, she ducked and dived under the table against the far wall and leaped over the chairs near the fireplace before running through the door and out of the living room. I followed in hot pursuit through the doorway into the hall. I looked left and right clueless as I wondered what direction she had run off to. Movement caught my eye to the left in the kitchen and I quickly darted like a cheetah into the room, almost slipping on the floor. I watched her open the patio door that lead out onto the deck. It was late evening and the sun was setting over the horizon of the town in the distance, I had to squint against the light as I followed cautiously out of the house. I could see Charlotte turning back to look at me to check if I was chasing her. I approached slowly, waiting for her to try to evade me, this time I would be ready. I walked further out onto the deck, the warmth of the sun bathing my naked body in its beautiful glow. I could see the outline of Charlotte’s small slender body against the sunset and I could feel my heart beating in anticipation. I continued to walk ever closer to her, cautiously taking it one-step at a time. I watched her body waiting for a sign that would tell me when she would bolt as she had done previously. I took three final steps and just before she was in my grasp, she darted to my right. I expected her to do this and so I lunged to the right and grabbed her the waist as I pushed forwards. She screamed as we both fell backwards through the air before crashing into the warm water of the pool. The water swallowed me whole and I felt the familiar sound of water rushing past my ears and I could see our screams been turned into a swarm of bubbles that rose to the surface. I felt my body slow down and I began to push to the surface of the pool. I broke through the surface with Charlotte and we both coughed and gagged as the pool water trickled down our throats. I laughed while gagging and jumped onto Charlotte grabbing her with my arms yelling. “I caught you!” “Ok, Ok. Let me go” she spluttered as she continued to cough. I helped her to the pool edge and sat with her on the side, our feet dangling in the water. I patted her gently on the back as her last few coughs came through. I smiled at her and leant on her shoulder. “Are you ok now Charl?” I asked casually as I watched the sun “Yeah.., I guess, can we go back inside? I’m starving,” she responded as she breathed in deeply, catching her breathe back from all the coughing. “Sure, come on.” I said as I got to my feet and held my hand out for her to take. She took hold of my hand, I helped her to her feet, and we walked hand in hand back into the house. We went through the kitchen and back into the living room where the fire was still crackling away. I sighed slightly as the warmth of the fire reached my skin once again and I picked up my towel from the chair and wrapped it around my body. I sat back down with the towel around my back, my front exposed to the warmth of the fire. We sat there in silence for a few minutes while the fire dried us off but our silence was interrupted as my dad came into the room with two boxes of takeout pizza, which had stream seeping out through the holes in the side. I licked my lips excitedly as he placed the boxes on the carpet in between Charlotte and me. “Here you go girls, lovely take-away pizza. I’ll get you some drinks.” He said as he opened the lid to reveal a delicious deep pan cheese and ham pizza. My stomach growled a thank-you response as I leapt from the chair onto the carpet and tore off a slice. Charlotte quickly followed suit and took another slice from the pizza. “Thanks daddy!” I said as I chomped on the pizza. I tore of the end of the slice with my teeth and watched as a string of cheese stretched between my mouth and the pizza slice. I giggled slightly as I licked up the cheese string in my mouth. My dad smiled and leant over to give me a little hug before getting up to get Charlotte and me some drinks. He soon returned with the drinks and we all ate the pizza and garlic bread happily, talking about this and that. We did not speak about anything important because it was always a rule that in the weekend we could not talk about work because we had earned the weekend off. After the meal, I fell back on the carpet my body stretched out and my stomach felt ready to burst from all the dough. I groaned slightly as I watched my stomach rise slowly before falling back down, I was completely stuffed and I glanced across at Charlotte who also had laid down on her back the same as me. I smiled half-heartedly at her before forcefully pulling myself up into an upright position. I spread my legs and wiggled my toes as I let the heat continue to wrap around my body like a warm blanket. I turned back to see my daddy sitting in the couch chair with a glass of wine in front of the television that was quietly playing an episode of some TV drama. I yawned as I got up off the floor and stretched my body. “Come on Charlotte, let’s go upstairs and play.” I said as I walked towards the door. “Ok, thank-you for the pizza” she said to my dad as she crawled to the door. She groaned slightly as she stood up right, she seemed stuffed as well from the food. “No problem girls, don’t stay up to late now.” He chuckled before taking another sip of his wine. I walked out of the living room with Charlotte and we slowly walked up the stairs and into my room. I looked at a clock on my desk and saw it was 8:20pm, still plenty of time before we would need to go to sleep, though I felt worn out already and ready to sleep at any moment. “Hey Daisy, can I have a bath? I’m all icky from the pool” she sniggered as she hovered in the doorway. “Good idea, we can stay in my room after as well.” I replied as I walked out on the landing. “DADDY! Charlotte and me are having a bath!” I shouted down so he would know where we were. I stood leant over the banister of the landing before seeing my dad walk into view. “Alright, do you want me to run the water for you?” he asked as he looked up. “Nah, I can manage on my own” I replied. “Ok, there is no bubble bath left though, so you won’t have any bubbles I’m afraid.” “Awwhh, fine… thanks daddy.” I said with a sigh. I loved having bubbles in my bath, it always made it more relaxing but I suppose water would have to do. I went with Charlotte into the bathroom and turned the taps making sure the water was at a nice temperature. The bathroom was one of two in the house but the only one that had a bath. The walls were tiled with a light cream tile that had a dolphin pattern running in a ring form in the middle around the bathroom walls. The floor was made up of a clear white tile with a fluffy brown bath rug lying in the middle. The bath itself was modern with varnished wooden panels on the outside and enamel interior. It was fairly large as well and could easily hold me and Charlotte with ease. I watched as the water filled the tub and I sat on the bath edge as I waited with my hand in the water making sure the temperature stayed hot enough. I watched as Charlotte looked into the mirror that was slowly beginning to fog up from the heat of the bath water. I giggled to myself as I watched her look up and down her body. She always liked looking at herself in the mirror and touching herself all over, making silly poses every not and again. She also cupped her chest a lot and complained about how she wanted boobies already rather than stupid little bumps. I always went into hysterics when she complained and I was snickering to myself even now while thinking about it. She turned around once the mirror was completely fogged up and looked at me confusingly. “What’s so funny?” she asked me, I burst into full laughter as she asked unable to hold it in anymore. “Oh… nothing. Just you.” I responded as I held my hand over my mouth trying to contain my laughter “What do you mean me!? Is there something on my back?” she squealed as she span in circles trying to look at her back. I burst out laughing again and almost lost my balance which would have meant me falling into the running bath. “No silly! I was laughing because I was thinking about time you complained about not having boobies!” I said as I gasped for breath. “Ohh! But don’t you want boobies as well? All the big girls look so pretty with them.” She said as she walked over to the bath edge and sat next to me. I blushed slightly as I looked down on the slightly raised lumps of my chest. I could feel my body beginning to tingle all over again and I shuddered slightly as I breathed in. “I guess, but I don’t see the big deal really.” I sighed as stared at my chest. “That’s because you’re still a child!” she said with a massive grin across her face. “I am not! We’re pretty much the same age!” I protested, looking at her coldly in the eye. “Oh yeah? Then where are your boobies?” she said as she extended her arm outwards and poked me on my nipples. I squealed slightly as her finger made contact and a chill ran up my spine. Little bumps formed all over my body, as the tingling feelings grew stronger. “You don’t have any either!” I argued as I reached over and prodded her chest. I watched as Charlotte jumped slightly as I made contact with her body. It was like earlier, the wonderful feelings flowed throughout my body. “True… but I will soon! Anyway, Daisy… the bath?” she said while nodding at the rising water. I gasped as I franticly shut off the water before it had a chance to rise to high. I rotated my legs to the other side of the bath and let my feet drop into the water. The temperature was perfect and I quickly dropped my entire body of the edge of the bath and sat there in the clear water. I breathed in deeply and arched my head back as the water felt great against my skin. Charlotte swung her own legs in and sat down into the water. We sat opposite each other with our legs spread, each leg resting next to the other person leg. I could feel her foot was very near my pussy and a part of me for some reason wanted it to touch me. I decided to take a risk and I slumped down into the water a bit more and I felt Charlottes foot push up against my body and in turn, my own foot pressed against hers. She let out a yelp as she sat upright to which I just giggled. She smiled and slumped back down herself and we laid there with each other’s foot resting on each other’s pussy. The waves of pleasure continued to flow around me just as the warm bath water did and I felt as though I was in heaven. I leant my head back against the bath, closed my eyes, and moaned slightly as I relaxed. After a few moments I began to feel Charlotte pushing against my foot in back and forth motions. I could also hear her breathing heavily and I risked tilting my head up to look at her. She had her head leant back as I had and she was thrusting her body forwards gently, her pussy rubbing against my foot. I sat there with my jaw hanging in shock at what she was doing but at the same time, I could feel my own pussy pulsating in the water. I bit my lip as I tried to fight the pressure but I ended up joining Charlotte in thrusting and I began to rub my pussy against the palm of Charlotte’s foot in the water. Electricity flowed through my body as I moaned loudly. The feeling was incredible and almost felt as good as when Charlotte had put her fingers in my pussy. We both moaned and panted quietly as we continued to rub and thrust in the bath. The water sloshed slightly as it moved back and forth in waves. The waves flowed in between the gap of my pussy and Charlotte’s foot and only added to the pleasure that I was feeling. The similar feeling of about to burst returned all to quickly and I felt myself rubbing harder than I had ever before against her foot and when I pushed too hard her big toe found its way inside. I shot upright as a silent scream left mouth and I could feel my pussy pulsate with ferocity as it clamped around Charlottes toe. I could feel her toe moving in and out of my pussy quickly as she continued to thrust harder and harder. I crashed back against the head of the bath, which caused water to splash out onto the floor, but all I could do was lay there breathing franticly. Charlottes toe continued to rub inside my pussy and it wasn’t long before she gave a big push and she shot upright as well letting out a loud moan that echoed in the bathroom which a part of me feared my daddy would hear. She fell back against the bath as I did but softer so water stayed in the tub. She breathed deeply and opened her eyes to look at me with a devilish grin. I returned her grin and we caught our breath back. We kept our feet pushed against each other’s pussies and every now again Charlotte would twitch her foot and send waves of tingling pleasure up through my pussy and up my spine. After a while, one of us finally found the strength to speak. “That… was… awesome.” Charlotte said in short breaths “Yeah…” was all I could reply as I continued to breathe deeply. “Why does it feel good to touch your pussy though?” she asked with a confused expression on her face. “I’m not sure, but I don’t think this is something we can just ask people.” I said with a slight tone of fear in my voice that what we may have done was a very naughty thing to do. “Agreed. But we should do it again, but keep it our secret right?” she asked almost pleadingly and I knew why, the last five minutes had been the best of my life far and I was desperate to do whatever it takes to make those feelings come back and last even longer. “Our secret.” I simply said with a smile. I moved onto my knees, leant forward, and grabbed her in a warm hug, water dripping from my body. She wrapped her arms around mine and gave me a kiss on the lips as she had done earlier and we stayed in that position for what seemed like ages. Finally, I broke the kiss and sat back down in the bath. “We should actually wash up.” I said as I reached for the bar of soap that rested on a shelf above the bathtub. “Ok, but we wash each other ok?” she suggested, giggling the entire time. “Deal” I said as I grasped hold of the soap. I lowered it under the water to wet it and began to rub it in my hands to make the soap. I rubbed my hands together before telling Charlotte to stand up. She eagerly obliged and stood before me. The water was up to her knees and I could now clearly see her swollen pussy in front of me. I wanted to tease her a little though. I stood up as well and stepped closer to her. I began rub my soapy hands down her arm, covering them in the slippery soap. She giggled slightly as it tickled but did not stop it. I smiled happily at the experience, enjoying it immensely. I repeated the process for her other arm, making sure I had plenty of soap in my hands. I then grabbed the facecloth, wet it in the water, and began to wash the soap from her arms slowly. Watching each drop fall back into the bathtub. Her skin looked glossy through the layer of water that clung onto her skin and her arms felt so smooth under my touch as I stroked down them with the cloth. I then re-soaped my hands and turned her around before rubbing them down her back, covering it entirely in soap. I felt her body shudder many times under my touch and I could see her hand had begun to rub against her pussy as our foots had done. She was also moaning softly as I washed the soap from her back. I told her to turn to face me again as I soaped up my hands once more and I could see she was still rubbing herself In front of me. She didn’t have a shred of embarrassment as she continued to play with her pussy. I felt excited as I began to rub my hands across her smooth chest in circular motions trying to avoid her busy arm. I spent extra time rubbing her nipples with my soapy hands, clutching the tip in between my fingers and pinching them slightly. I did not know if it felt good but I guessed it did since Charlotte began to pant and moan even faster. I removed my hands, grabbed the face cloth, and allowed it to soak up a good amount of water before I lifted it above her chest and squeezed it to allow the water to flow down on her chest like a waterfall. Charlotte gasped as her whole body began to shake and she had to clutch onto me to avoid losing balance and falling. I laughed as I steadied her and moved her to sit on the edge of the bathtub facing inwards. I removed the last of the soap from her chest and stomach before I began to soap up her legs. Her whole body felt amazing to my touch and the skin was so smooth as well as soft. I washed off her legs and that left only her swollen red pussy to be cleaned. I licked my lips slightly as I soaped up my hands and began to slowly and teasingly stretch my hands out towards her. She whimpered slightly, begging for me to hurry up but I was having way to much fun. This was my revenge for earlier. I finally made contact and began to caress her pussy in my grasp, rubbing the soap around the folds of her pussy lips. I grinned as I rubbed for a long period, spreading the soap to the inside of her thighs. She parted her legs wide to make it easier for me and this caused her lips to spread slightly, which gave me the idea to insert my finger. I cautiously pushed forwards with my long finger and I felt it begin to enter inside Charlotte. I watched in fascination as it slid effortlessly inside with the aid of the soap. Charlotte moaned ans gasped each time I went a little deeper. Within the next few seconds however I had my entire finger inside her pussy and I could feel it squeezing my tightly. I began to move it back out again about half way before pushing it back in again, letting my knuckle reach the outside of her pussy. She rasped a sharp intake of breath each time I moved inwards and I continued to do this for some time. I could feel her trying to push back while at the same time staying on the edge of the bathtub. I giggled as I reached down to my own pussy with my free hand and began to rub it eagerly as the intense feelings cried out. I felt as though my pussy was on fire and he everlasting waves of pleasure that flowed throughout my body showed no sign of ever subsiding. I was in pure heaven and never wanted this moment to end. However, it did with Charlotte squealing loudly and falling into the bath against me. As her body crashed against mine I let out a moan through my open mouth, which ended up, been gagged Charlotte’s chest as she fell against me. My pussy seemingly explored and I felt extremely dizzy as the room span around. I laid against the edge of the bath with my mouth wrapped around Charlottes nipple. Her skin did not taste of anything really but it felt amazing to me that I had her nipple in my mouth. Instinctively I began to suck on it as though I was a ba and I could hear Charlotte’s voice in a distant haze muttering at how great that felt and not to stop. I had no intention of stopping as the feeling of my tongue on her nipple felt amazing, even for me. I continued to hungrily suck on it like a newborn ba wanting milk and I desperately tried to stay latched onto Charlotte as she positioned her body to sit on top of my legs, which were scrunched up against the side of the bath. She sat more on my stomach with her body resting on top of mine. I felt her hand fumble around my pussy searching for it as I continued to suck. Eventually she found it and as she began to slide her finger inside I swapped over to Charlottes other nipple and began to suck even harder. The room was still spinning and all I could focus on was how amazing I felt and how that this moment would be forever in my memory. I continued to moan while sucking which meant my lips vibrated around Charlottes nipple which made her coo slightly and purr like a happy kitten while she continued to explore my pussy with her finger. I thrusted slowly against her pushing finger and gripped onto it tightly as it left my pussy, never wanting to let it go. I could feel the intense pressure building up again, though it was taking longer than the first few times but soon I found myself ready to explode once more. I tried to fight the feeling as I knew if I exploded it would all end but I couldn’t hold it any longer and I bit down onto Charlotte’s nipple as I screamed in pleasure. Charlotte also screamed with pleasure as I bit but the pain made the feelings she felt even more intense. My body fell limp and Charlotte slid off me and laid down in the water next to me with her knees’ up against the side of the bath like I was. We breathed deeply before hearing a startling knock on the door. “Girls, are you ok? I heard a scream.” My daddy asked through the closed door. I felt my heart stop in my chest in panic. I could not answer but rather only stare at the door waiting for daddy to enter and go berserk at us for doing naughty things. “We’re fine. Daisy just fell over and banged her arm.” Charlotte responded, her voice slightly higher than usual. “Sure you don’t want me to come in and make sure she’s ok?” he responded with a concerned tone that showed he was worried that I had fallen. “I’m… I’m fine daddy” I managed to reply in a broken voice. “Alright… make sure you let me kiss it better afterwards.” He said before walking away from the door. I sighed with relief as he left and looked across to Charlotte before bursting out in laughter. I leant on her shoulder and she then rested her head against mine as we stared at the door. We breathed calmly as we let the soapy water caress our bodies. “It’s going to be a long night isn’t it?” Charlotte asked me with a content smile on her face. “Sure is.” I replied. Closing my eyes slowly before snuggling against Charlotte for the second time that night. “It sure is… and I can’t wait.” ___________________________________________________________________________________ Thank-you for reading and I hope you really enjoyed this part of the story. I am going to write a third installment of this before moving onto another project which you may find interesting but more on that at a later date. Wish you all the best, remember to give a comment or rating on the story and even if you did not enjoy it, tell me why and I will happily work on it in the future. All the best. Cuddlesthabear.
Fiction , Consensual Sex, Domination/submission, Female / Girl, Girls domination, Lesbian, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Romance, Slavery, Spanking, Young Posted: 2012-10-2620:01:34 Report Author’s infos Gender: Male Age: Secret Location: Magical Box Introduction: The final chapter of Preteen Dream! Welcome to Part 3 and possibly the final instalment of Preteen Dream. I may continue the series afterwards if the demand is high but for the most part, I will be moving onto a new series, which I will explain at the end of the story. I would like to also thank everyone who PM’ed me regarding been a proof-reader for me and I am very grateful that so many people took an interest. I have however chosen a reader who is known on XNXX as droopysdad. Droopy will be proofreading my future stories before public release and giving me first hand feedback on the stories. Again, I am sorry I could not let everyone help me but I am still grateful never the less and I hope you continue to enjoy my work. Therefore, without further a due, here is Preteen Dream part 3. _________________________________________________________________________________ Preteen Dream Part 3 Written Cuddlesthabear I slowly opened my eyes after a few minutes of resting and stared longingly at the door to the bathroom. My body was exhausted and I found it difficult to summon the strength to move any of my muscles. Forcefully though, I quickly washed my body with the cloth as Charlotte lay against the side of the bathtub. The water was beginning to grow cold and I could see my fingertips becoming all wrinkly. I prodded Charlotte on the leg and told her to get up so we could dry off. I dragged my body out of the water and shivered slightly as the last remaining drops ran down my back and legs before splashing against the tiled floor. Charlotte struggled as well as she attempted to climb out of the tub. I helped her over the edge but she stumbled slightly as she made contact with the slippery floor. I quickly caught her and laughed tiredly as I held her upright. I grabbed a big pink towel that was resting on the towel rack in the corner of the room. I moved quickly back over to Charlotte and began to rub her body dry with the towel. I began with her arms; I wrapped the towel around them, and began to rub up and down quickly in order to dry her. I continued to dry before stroking her skin with my hand to make sure that she was properly dry. I then moved onto her chest; I wrapped the towel around her body, and began to rub all over, taking extra care as I rubbed her slightly raised mounds. I gently stroked her body checking for any damp spots before moving onto the next part of her body. I could hear Charlotte moaning softly as I caressed her body gently with the towel. I finished drying of the rest of her body until all that was left was her swollen pussy that glistened slightly under the harsh light of the bathroom. I brought the towel to her pussy lips and began to rub gently around the outside causing Charlotte to gasp at the softness of the towel making contact with her bare pussy. I grinned to myself as I pushed a little harder and began to rub up and down, drying out her soft delicate skin. After several moments of rubbing I ran my hand around her pussy to make sure it was dry. I grinned slightly as I ran my fingertip down the slit of her pussy lips causing Charlotte to shudder under my touch. “How strange, you’re pussy is still all wet!” I giggled sarcastically as I continued to run my finger up and down her lips. She responded only moaning and grinding her hips against my touch but I had decided she had had enough attention from me and it was my turn. “Come on Charlotte, you’ve had all the attention tonight! I want you to pay me back now.” I pouted to her. I stood in front of her with my arms folded while she wrapped the towel tightly around herself. My skin had already dried naturally from the heat in the bathroom but I still wanted some fun. “Fine then! But let’s go into your room first.” She said with a slight tone of disappointment to her voice. “Ok, I’ll meet you in my room, I’ll tell Dad we’re going to bed.” I said as I opened the bathroom door. I walked outside the door and looked up and down the landing wondering where my dad was. I called out to him from the landing. “Dad!?” I yelled “I’m downstairs honey.” He shouted back. I ran down the stairs quickly taking the steps two at a time before jumping the final few, almost slipping on the floor. I ran into the living room and saw my dad sitting in the armchair watching TV. I quickly jumped up onto his lap and hugged him tightly. He wrapped his arms around me and tickled my hips slightly before wrestling me to the floor, laughing all the while. I begged him to stop through my own laughter and it took me moments of torture before I could finally wriggle away from his reach. As I scrambled away to the other side of the room he sat back in his chair and looked at me casually. “We’re off to bed now daddy.” I said through deep intakes of breath. “Alright sweetie, don’t stay up too late though please.” He said as he reached over for his glass of wine that rested on a table the armchair. He took a deep sip of it as he watched me closely. I shivered slightly under his gaze but shrugged it off as I ran towards him and gave him another warm hug before saying goodnight and kissing him on the cheek. “Good-night sweetie.” He said as he gave me a kiss himself on my cheek. I turned around to walk away before I quickly felt a sharp playful slap on my bum. I yelped loudly in surprise and turned around to hit my daddy playfully. He grinned as he struggled to keep the wine glass steady while I attacked him with light slaps on his legs. “Now Now! Go to bed!” he said while laughing warmly. I rolled my eyes as I said night while laughing softly myself. I went to the door and turned around one last time and stuck my tongue out menacingly at him before running out of the living room, making sure that the door was closed behind me. “You’ll regret that sweetie!” I heard him shout from behind the door in a jokey voice. I sighed to myself at how much of a child he could be at times, even though I was 10 I still at times felt as though I was older than he was. I stretched my body trying to make my sleepiness go away before running back up the stairs. I quickly turned out the bathroom light and carried on into my room where I closed the door behind me and leant against sighing with relief and excitement. I looked around the room for Charlotte and noticed her sitting up in my bed. I moved over, turned my night light on, and turned the overhead light of so my dad would think we were asleep. I then ran over to the ladder and quickly climbed up onto the softness of my bed sheets, I grabbed Charlotte and pinned her down on the bed and I laid there on top of her trying to restrain her. She struggled and kicked out trying to prise me of her, she eventually succeeded, and she managed to scramble on top of me before pinning me down, stomach flat against the bed. I felt her bum sit on top of my back and she held me there securely, her arms keeping mine pinned next to my body. She rotated her body so that she could user her feet to pin my arms my sides leaving her own arms free. She giggled as she held me there and I continued to struggle while also laughing myself. My body was tingling all over and I felt very excited, my excitement however, intensified dramatically as I felt a light slap against my bum cheek. I let out a slight squeal as Charlotte’s hand made contact with my skin. The place she slapped me tingled slightly as a small amount of pain shot through my body. However, I hardly felt the pain and it felt more pleasurable instead. “Now you have to do exactly as I want or I’ll net let you go!” Charlotte said in a mocking voice. I shivered slightly as her words echoed in my ear and I suddenly felt very excited for some strange reason. All of this was new to both of us but at the same time it felt somewhat natural and in the end it was enjoyable so it had to be all right. “From now you’ll call me Princess Charlotte and you’ll be my slave.” She said evilly into my ear. I tried to struggle while giggling to myself at how silly Charlotte was been. “Nah! I’ll be the princess and you can be the slave!” I said in retaliation. I soon felt another slap on my other bum cheek and again the impact tingled and sent electric shocks through my body that caused me to moan rather than scream. The slap itself was rather gentle but still hurt slightly but yet again, that pain turned into pleasure. I giggled slightly and I could hear Charlotte laughing also as she enjoyed playing this new game. “Bad slave! If you do not behave, I will keep smacking your bottom until you do! Naughty slave!” she said before adding another gentle slap at the end of her sentence to make her point. I could feel my pussy tensing and pulsating slightly as I uncontrollably ground my hips into the bed sheets, letting the soft material caress my pussy. As I gently thrusted, I could feel wetness on my back and a large amount of heat radiate from Charlotte’s pussy and I could tell she was also feeling pleasurable feelings erupt through her body. I was breathing in quickly as I replied. “Sorry Princess Charlotte, I’ll behave, I promise!” I said in a faked pleading voice, I was enjoying this game and I did not want it to end anytime soon so I happily played along as I continued to ride the waves of pleasure that fluttered through my body like a swarm of butterflies. “Good slave, now for behaving I will give you a reward.” She said with a cheeky grin painted across her face. I could only just see her face out of the corner of my eye as I turned my head sideways against the mattress. “If I get up do you promise to be good?” she said in a stern but jokey voice. “I promise Princess.” I replied equally as jokey. I could not stop giggling at how naughty this game felt yet it felt so good at the same time. I felt the weight of Charlotte’s body leave mine and I watched as she sat on her knees in the middle of my sprawled legs. I arched my back slightly to get rid of the ache where Charlotte had sat on me. I however then laid there perfectly still waiting for Charlotte to instruct me on what to do next. I could tell she was thinking of what to do and she was slightly nervous herself but I just smiled as I watched her from the corner of my eye. She saw my smile and acknowledged it restoring her grin to her face. She folded her arms and spoke softly and gently, a more relaxed version of her princess voice. “Roll over onto your back.” She said simply. I quickly complied and turned my body onto my back, my swollen pussy facing her boldly. She looked directly into my eyes before she moved onto all fours in front of me and she climbed up so that her head was level with mine. She moved her head down to my left slightly and whispered into my ear: “Time for your reward.” She whispered. As she spoke, I shivered as chills went down my spine directly to my pussy and I felt a wave of pleasure convulse over my body. However, I was not prepared for what Charlotte did next! She moved back quickly, lowered her head to my chest, and wrapped her lips around my left nipple where my boobies would hopefully form. I began to scream in pleasure but Charlotte quickly covered my mouth with her hand and muffled my scream. I felt my body explode as wave after wave shook through my body like an earthquake. The feeling was incredible and the best I had ever experienced so far. I really needed to find out what this feeling was called! As my body calmed down I began to feel Charlotte sucking gently like a ba on my nipple, in addition I could also feel her tongue swirling around it gently. It felt slimy but the feeling was incredible as each suck sent waves of pleasure through my body that ended up back in my pussy causing it to pulsate and tense constantly, each time the pleasure increased. I was breathing franticly now, struggling to take in enough air as Charlottes hand clasped my mouth shut. I however moaned with every breath I could spare as she continued to lick my nipple. I bucked my hips upwards and I could feel my soaked pussy brush softly against Charlottes belly as I bucked. I continued to buck harder and harder, desperate to keep making contact with Charlotte’s soft skin, allowing the pleasure to fly all around my body and crash into each other sending eruptions up and down my spine like a busy road filled with race cars. Everything felt simply amazing and wonderful to me and I was somewhat sad that I had only just discovered this amazing thing but happy that I discovered it with my best friend. After what seemed like eternity but in reality must have been only five to ten minutes, she released my nipple from her mouth which was now rock hard and swollen slightly with redness around the tip from where she had sucked slightly too hard. I stared up at the ceiling as Charlotte sat there on all fours leaning over my body. She giggled slightly as she released her grasp on my mouth; I let out a long sigh, which caused Charlotte to burst into laughter even more. She moved back, sat on her knee’s again in front of me, and covered her mouth as she laughed hysterically. I could see her other hand motioning quickly down her pussy and I smiled to myself as I laid there catching my breath. “Thank-you Princess! That was great!” I weakly stammered while trying to gasp for air. I propped myself up with my arms behind my back and sat upright with my legs spread open allowing the wetness to seep slowly into the sheets. I cautiously moved my hand to my pussy and stroked the slit gently, it almost hurt that it was so sensitive; I found it amazing that so much pleasure could actually hurt! My pussy felt very slimy and slippery though and I scooped up this wetness in my fingers and rubbed them together. It was very slippery and the juice shimmered slightly under the faint light. I moved my hand to my mouth and sniffed it hesitantly; I was so nervous that it looked like I almost half expected it to attack me. The smell was quite sweet like honey so out of instinct I brought my fingers to my mouth and gingerly stuck out my tongue, making contact slowly with my fingers. I could see Charlotte sitting on her knee’s rubbing her pussy slowly, inserting her finger in and out of her pussy, rubbing mostly against her swollen and sensitive button, she was moaning slightly as she forced her eyes to stay open and watch my every move. I licked the wet juice from my fingers and tasted it for a moment, my face was slightly quizzical as I tried to interoperate the taste but I could not think of anything that tasted the same. What it did taste like though was something very sweet and it was very smooth yet sticky. I could feel it sticking to my teeth and the roof of my mouth slightly as I swirled my tongue around my mouth making sure I licked up every drop. I decided I liked the taste and so I put the two wet fingers into my mouth and I began to suck the juice off them hungrily, making slight ‘mmhm’ noises as I hungrily feasted. Charlotte stared at me in awe while she continued to stroke her pussy. I removed my now clean fingers from my mouth and licked my lips slowly. I giggled slightly as I looked at Charlotte. “Try it! It tastes great!” I said as I nodded towards her busy hand. She shook her head quickly to break the trance she was in before she scooped up some of the juice from her saturated pussy as I had done. I watched her as she slowly brought her fingers to her mouth. I stared in anticipation with a smile across my face as I watched her lips slowly part. She steadily put the fingers into her open mouth and I nodded reassuringly before she clamped her lips shut around the fingers. I watched as she began to suck and I saw her eyes light up in amazement and I could tell she adored the taste. She quickly and confidently sucked harder on her fingers before quickly scooping up another finger full of juice from her pussy and devouring it hungrily. I laughed as she feasted hungrily on herself and I quickly scooped up another load myself and joined her in the feast. “It tastes great doesn’t it?” I said half way through licking my fingers clean. “Oh my god I’ve never tasted anything this good before!” she responded in a husky voice. Soon though I could feel the wetness in my pussy slowly running out and before long, we both sat there with nothing left to feast on. “Hey, you know how you sucked on my nipple?” I asked hesitantly, unsure of whether to ask the question or not. Charlotte looked at me and nodded slowly wondering where I was going with this. “Well, can’t you do the same thing to my pussy?” I asked quickly, sighing with relief as I got it of my chest. “Eww! But you pee from there!” she responded, grimacing slightly as she looked at my pussy. “But we’ve already licked the juice ourselves and put our fingers inside each other.” I protested. I really wanted to try this to see if it could feel as good as when she sucked on my nipples. “I don’t know… you have to lick my pussy first if we do.” She said in a reluctant voice. “That’s not fair!” I moaned in disgust “It was my idea! You should lick me first!” “But I’m the princess and you are my slave, or should I punish you again?” she said with a grin on her face, she rose her hand into the air slightly to make her point but I was not giving up this time. “How about we lick at same time?” I suggested, desperate to play fairly so that we could both win. “How can we do that?” she asked almost stunned, in addition forgetting her princess authority. “Easy!” I said. “We’re pretty much same height so just climb on top of me and turn so you’re facing other way.” I explained, motioning with my hands what to do. “So my bum is near your face you mean?” she asked while giggling. When she put it that way I also giggled but nodded in agreement. Charlotte clumsily moved her body into position and I laid back down on the bed. I watched as her bum came ever closer before stopping directly above my face. I could clearly see her pussy and feel the heat radiate onto my face. I licked my lips in anticipation. “Are you ready?” I asked. “Not really, but let’s do it” she responded in a nervous voice. I smiled and ran my hand across her pussy causing her to jump in surprise but she gently lowered her bum down and I felt her pussy resting on my lips. “Let’s do this.” I said with a wave of reassurance. I moved my tongue through my lips and stretched it outwards making contact with Charlotte’s pussy. At the same time, I felt her warm and wet tongue against my button in my pussy and I gasped as I drove my tongue inside Charlottes Pussy, which in turn caused her to do the same. We both moaned into each other’s pussy’s sending vibrations from our mouths straight into the swollen and sensitive mounds in between each other’s legs. Our bodies shook violently as pleasure assaulted us ferociously. Moan after moan escaped my mouth into Charlotte’s pussy sending her into uncontrollable spasm. I felt her hips grind roughly against my mouth and I could feel her pussy lips clamp down on my tongue squeezing it pleasurably as I lapped at her sweet juice. At the same time, I was thrusting my hips upwards trying to hold Charlottes tongue deep inside my own spasming pussy. I could feel her lick up every drop of juice that formed in my pussy while in turn I hungrily devoured hers. I ran my tongue up and down the slit of her pussy like a rabid animal. We were completely out of control, feasting on each other’s juices not wanting to stop in fear that the other would also stop. I continued to assault her pussy with my tongue and I made sure I licked and sucked on her sensitive button at the top of her pussy, which caused her to grind deeply against my face. I found it difficult to make all of the juice go inside my mouth and I could feel wetness all over my chin and nose as she buckled wildly. I was doing the same but I could feel my hips tiring and my mind going hazy as my vision began to blur. I closed my eyes and kept licking and sucking and lapping for all I was worth before I finally lost the ability to think. I felt my thoughts come back into life in a dim lit room. I could see the ceiling clearly above me and it took me a moment to realise what had happened. I sat up with my elbows behind my back holding me arched up slightly. I looked over to my left and saw Charlotte lying on her stomach next to me, her pussy and bum staring proudly at me in the light of the room. The memories came rushing back and I fell back against the bed as I felt a shiver run through my spine and I smiled proudly to myself as I thought of all the events that had passed. I fumbled clumsily as I leant over the edge of my bunk bed desk to look at the clock that was lying face up on my drawers. The clock read 11:26 PM. It was very late but I felt wide-awake and there was no way that I could sleep after having so much fun. I gently crawled over to Charlotte and lay on my stomach next to her. I put my head down on its side and stared at Charlotte’s face as she slept. I lay next to her for a while, smiling as my heart melted watching her sleep. She was adorable when she slept and I did not want to disturb her but there was far too much fun to be had. I gently shook her shoulder and giggled slightly as she groaned and tried to roll over. “Charlotte, wake up.” I whispered, cautious that my daddy would probably be upstairs in bed himself now. She groaned again but slowly her eyes parted to face me. She stared at me for a moment before gasping in fright. I laughed as her body shot up and she recoiled away from me in fear. I covered my mouth in an attempt to muffle my laughter. “Wh… Wh… Wha.. What..” She stammered, her eyes darting all around the room. I continued to laugh into my hand as I shook my head. Charlotte really was a fool at times. “It’s me silly! Daisy.” I said, keeping my voice relatively low. She relaxed a little and I could tell her face that she was beginning to piece together the events of that night. I chuckled before letting out a pitiful sigh. I moved over to Daisy, sat next to her, and wrapped my arms around her, holding her warm body against me. She snuggled her head against me and I was convinced that she was almost purring like a kitten. I stroked her soft hair as we leant together on my bed in the dim light of my room. There was a strong smell in the air that smelled of pussy juice and I breathed in the scent lovingly. I smiled to myself as I kept replaying the events repeatedly in my head. “What time is it?” Charlotte muttered in a quiet voice “Half eleven almost, are you too tired to stay up?” I asked reassuringly. “Nah, you scared me so much that I’m wide awake.” She giggled in response. I smiled guiltily to myself as I held my arms tightly around her. “Sorry,… Princess. You should punish me.” I said in a mocking tone. I could feel the excitement already building back in-between my legs. It took a moment for Charlotte to remember the princess and slave game but she quickly resumed her dominant role. “Yes… I should, you have been very naughty waking me up like that!” she shouted in a quiet voice, I quickly motioned for her to keep quiet as possible and she nodded apologetically before resuming character. “Now lie down slave so I can slap your bum!” she commanded sternly. I could see though she was desperately trying to hold back a smile of pleasure. “Yes Princess.” I replied in a pitiful voice that I put on to show I was scared though inside I was bursting with joy; I loved having Charlotte slap my bum for some reason. I lay down on my stomach in front of Charlotte and placed my hands under my head to act as a pillow. “You’ll get ten slaps for been so naughty!” she said, her voice breaking slightly from giggles. I tensed my bum in anticipation and then I felt the first slap against my skin. The sound was alarmingly loud in the quietness of the room and I tensed sharply through fear rather than pain but moaned never the less as pleasure rode around my body. Charlotte paused and stared at the door in slight fear as well, we stayed like that for a few minutes but after hearing no movement, we sighed with relief and resumed the game. “I’m feeling nice so I’ll only give you five slaps slave.” She said in a kind yet harsh tone. I let out a fake whimper and braced as her hand came down on my bum again, slapping the skin gently enough as not to hurt me but hard enough to cause a slight sting. I moaned and grinded my hips into the bed as her hand made contact. I felt her hand slap me two more times, each slap caused me to shake slightly and grind my hips sharply into the bed, desperate to relieve the tension that was rapidly building in my pussy. I moaned and breathed heavily and as her final slap made contact, I felt her hand rest against my enflamed cheek. She left her hand there and began to caress my cheek with soft circular motions, occasionally squeezing lightly and giggling. I slowly thrusted my hips back and forth against the bed, I could feel the softness of the sheets caressing my aching pussy sending pleasure through my body. I groaned and panted as I continued to thrust harder and faster, all the while Charlotte stroked my bum gently. “You’re enjoying this punishment aren’t you slave.” She asked menacingly. I shifted slightly so that I could look at her while talking and I could see that she was rubbing her pussy while she stroked my bum and I instantly broke into a pleasured smile. “Yes princess, please punish me more.” I begged, this time my pleas were 100% real as I never wanted the feelings to end and I wanted the night to last for the rest of my life. She grinned and slid her hand down from my bum and I felt her finger push apart my pussy lips as it entered inside me. I let out a long groan as I felt my lips part way as her finger invaded my pussy. As soon as she was knuckle deep, I instantly grasped hold of her finger with my pussy and began to squeeze it pleasurably. I felt Charlotte begin to wiggle her finger around inside my pussy, rubbing briskly against the walls that clamped around it. I shook constantly and forced my pussy into the bed causing Charlotte’s finger to push inside even deeper. Every time she moved deeper, I let out a moan and not before long; I began to pant uncontrollably as I felt my pussy explode from another bomb of pleasure. I clasped my hands over my mouth quickly as I screamed into them. I pushed my head hard into the mattress hoping to muffle myself. Through my ears, I could hear Charlotte rasp a deep intake of breath before moaning loudly. She quickly withdrew her finger from my pussy and pushed it inside her mouth to muffle her own pleasurable release. Our bodies shook for minutes as we felt wave after wave of pleasure flow through us. All the strength in my body had gone and it felt as though I was aching all over. Charlotte fell down next to me and her face landed opposite mine. We stared into each other’s eyes for ages, unable to move due to exhaustion but we smiled pleasantly. I summoned all of the strength I had to move my body right up against hers as we laid on our sides opposite each other. I wrapped my arms around her, she did the same with hers, and we embraced each other tightly. Clinging on with what little strength we had left. My vision was blurry and my body was so sensitive that the slightest movement sent me wild. I felt Charlotte gently push her foot in between the middle of her legs and I felt her legs wrap around mine causing her pussy to press tightly against mine. I shuddered in pleasure as I felt the heat and wetness melt into my own pussy and I sighed deeply before pushing my lips against Charlottes. I kissed her softly, clumsily parting her lips with my tongue where I met her own tongue that still tasted sweet from the juices earlier. Our tongues nestled together as we breathed deeply through our noses, our bodies had seemingly become one massive nest of pleasure and every twitch and movement cascaded through both of our bodies sending electricity up and down our spines. I knew that from this day on Charlotte and I would forever be more than just friends with a secret, but something else entirely, I have no idea what… but I had feeling we would soon find out. Tonight was a dream, A pre-teen dream, the likes of which I would never ever forget, and to this day, I never have. The End. _________________________________________________________________________________
Fiction , Consensual Sex, Female / Girl, Female/Female, Lesbian, Masturbation, Romance, Young Posted: 2012-09-1519:59:08 Report Author’s infos Gender: Male Age: Secret Location: Magical Box Introduction: Two 10 year olds discover something magical. Hello there people! Long-time no see from me it seems and I do apologise for that really. I do not know really, what has been happening with me recently but my motivation for writing has really vanished over these last few months. I have been trying and trying to finish ‘Sex Education’ part 3 but alas, I have fully decided that I do not like the storyline of that series, as I really prefer realism within my stories, even though they are all entirely fiction of course. With that said, I am discontinuing that series for now and may someday pick it up again in the future if I feel like it but do not get your hopes up too high. Anyhow, I am still active on the XNXX site and I am going to try to force myself back into writing and hopefully, I can do with this adorable story about two 10-year-old girls discovering sexual pleasure. This story, like my others is completely consensual and features no dark themes, as that is not in my taste. However please remember this is a story in the young section so if you do not like stories of this nature, please do not read any further. This story is also complete fiction and I do not condone paedophilia in real life whatsoever, fantasy is however, fine with me. So I hope you enjoy the story and I will defiantly make a part 2 to this story, I will not make a deadline though as I hate working to them. Enjoy. Yours Truly. Cuddlesthabear _____________________________________________________________________________ Pre-teen Dream I sat in the red plastic chair with my head resting against the cool surface of the table in front of me. Boredom was all I could think about as I listened to my teacher chat on and on about the work we were supposed to be doing. We had been spending all week writing our autobiographies that we were supposed to read out to the class. The teacher began to call out names of my classmates to come to the front and begin reading. I sighed softly to myself in despair, willing for the clock to reach 3:15pm so I could go home. The classroom was boiling and I could feel my skin becoming all sticky and sweaty in the heat. [I]”Daisy! Sit up straight please and listen to Daniel.”[/I] my teacher shouted from the front of the classroom. My body shot upright suddenly and I felt my skin peel of the cool surface of the table. I grimaced slightly at the sound but tried to force myself to pay attention to Daniel. Daniel was a nice person, he often shared sweets with the class at lunchtimes but he was alas, very boring and I soon felt myself drift off again into a daydream. I was startled again as the teacher called out my name and I quickly blinked my eyes to force my brain to wake up. It was like a constant battle where my brain was screaming to go to sleep but I willed myself to get out of the small red plastic chair and walk steadily to the front of the class. I turned around and faced the sea of faces that was my class. None of my classmates seemed interested except for the few smarty-pants that sat on the front row. I took a deep breath, opened my green decorated biography, and began to read from the pages. ”Hello, my name is Daisy and I am 10 years old. I live in England in a small village called Heylain. I am in year 5 at school. I have soft ginger hair tied back in a ponytail, hazel eyes and my daddy says I have an adorable face with a few soft freckles and a button like nose. My favourite colour is green and my favourite food is spaghetti. My best friend is also called Charlotte.” I looked up on that last line to the back of the classroom and saw Charlotte grinning at me with her pearly white teeth showing. I smirked back as I continue to read the last few pages about some of the things that had happened in my life. Charlotte and I had been best friends for as long as I could remember. She lived with her mum because her daddy had died at war several years ago and her mum was very close friends with my daddy. This meant that Charlotte would often come around to my house or I would go to hers and play. In fact, Charlotte was coming over to my house for tea and a sleep over tonight, one of the other reasons I wanted the day to end quickly. I finished reading my biography and went back to my seat followed the chorus of drained and bored claps. I watched as Charlotte got up lazily out of her seat at the teachers call and dragged her weary body to the front of the class. I watched stand before the class with her biography open. In my eyes Charlotte had always been very pretty, her long and smooth brown hair fell neatly down her back and her hazel eyes dazzled proudly, I had always been jealous of her eyes. She had a cute face that always had a spark of mischief amongst the background and this was one of the reasons I liked her so much. My daddy had always referred to us as the ‘Cheeky Monkeys’ and it was a nickname that we lived up to proudly. We were generally both well behaved but cheeky nether the less. I snapped back to reality to the chorus of claps and I felt slightly guilty that I had been daydreaming through my best friend’s presentation. I smiled at her and clapped proudly as she returned to her seat. ”Alright class, it’s time to pack up your things and get your coats and bags.” the teacher announced from the front of the class. My heart leapt with excitement as I dashed to the back of the class and into the cloakroom where our coats were. Charlotte followed in hot pursuit, both of us wearing huge grins across our faces. I reached the coat pegs first and grabbed Charlottes coat, and mine tossing it to her through the air where she caught it successfully and ran back into the main area of the classroom. We packed up our things into our book bags and stood quietly behind our seats waiting for the final few minutes to slowly tick away on the clock. My legs twitched with anticipation as the second hand slowly approached the three on the clock. I could feel myself quietly counting down the seconds to freedom when suddenly, the bell echoed throughout the school and like a sprinting race we were off towards the door, I could hear the teacher behind shouting to slow down but I ignored him as I ran out of the door with Charlotte laughing hysterically. Standing outside in the playground were loads of parents waiting for their children to come running out of the classroom doors. I quickly spied out my dad who was picking us up and ran towards him arms outstretched. He crouched down with a grin across his face as he embraced me in a tight hug before lifting me up high into the air and spinning me around. I laughed as he placed me back down on the floor next to Charlotte. “I suppose you would like a hug as well Charlotte?” my daddy said in a warm and inviting voice. Charlotte nodded her head excitedly and I watched as my daddy took her in his arms, lifted her into the air, and began to spin her around as he did with me. I smiled to myself cheekily as I remembered how Charlotte had told me she had a crush on my daddy. It always made me giggle when I thought back to the time she told me that she thought my daddy was handsome and she wanted to marry him. When I thought about it, my dad was quite handsome. He was part Spanish and had an olive tint to his skin but also had strong arms and strong facial features that came from working out in the sun all day lifting heavy bricks and operating big machines. He also had very dark brown hair that curled back slightly and a light layer of hair across his chin and the side of his face, which always tickled me when he hugged me or kissed me. Once Charlotte had returned safely to the ground my daddy took both of our hands and started to lead us out of the playground towards the car that was parked amongst the grass area along the road opposite of the school. He helped us into the car and we strapped on our seatbelts and started talking amongst ourselves about stuff at school as we journeyed home. “So girls, did you have fun at school today?” my dad asked casually In the middle of our conversation. “Nah, not really. Was dead boring! The teacher made us read our biographies in front of the whole class.” I responded, with hints of boredom still present in my voice. “I’m sure you were both great” he responded reassuringly. “but don’t need to worry about school anymore, it’s the weekend and time for fun! What’s my rule girls?” I grinned as me and Charlotte both shouted in union “Work for the weekend!” I heard my dad chuckle at the front of the car as he nodded in agreement. “Good job girls, now let’s discuss tonight. I want you both in bed 8pm sharp after a healthy meal of vegetables and no TV.” I rolled my eyes as I smiled at my dad’s stupid jokes, which he thought were hilarious. “Daaaaaaad…. Whats the REAL plan?” I moaned from the back. “Alright, alright. Plan for tonight. Mountain of pizza, sweets and coca cola. Bedtime is whenever we fall asleep and number one priority is fun!” he beamed in a proud voice. Charlotte and me cheered with excitement as my dad continued to drive the car home. I loved my daddy, he was the best. He would always make sure that my friends and me had fun and was very generous and often allowed me to have what I wanted as long as it was reasonable. He was still strict if I was naughty but that was very rare and he would always forgive me later that day with a warm hug or gentle kiss on my forehead. We sat in quiet suspense as the distance quickly decreased between school and home. I lived the furthest away from the school in the hills overlooking the village. The view was amazing and you could see far off into the distance and even see the local town buildings reaching high up into the air. My house was custom built my daddy and his team after my mum had left us. He always told me that the house was to be my paradise and was designed to be perfect for me. My heart always melted and felt fuzzy when he told me the story of how he began laying the first few bricks that became our home. The style was quite modern, with wood panelling on the outside and black glass window frames. There was an outside balcony on the second floor and a swimming pool on the ground floor balcony that overlooked the town in the distance. Due to the house been fairly high up we were also pretty isolated so we could often scream and shout as loud as wanted when we played. We had reached the top of the hill and travelled a short way down the road through the cove of trees that covered the road before finally coming into sight of my house. My heart leapt as my dad pulled into the gravel drive way. The pebbles crunched and grinded under the wheels of the car as it crawled towards the garage door. The hum of the engine cut and Charlotte and me dashed out of the car and ran to the front door and stood there waiting eagerly for my daddy to let us in. He locked the car, approached the door with keys in hand, and opened the door allowing us to run inside the house straight upstairs into my room. We entered the room that was my heaven; my room was a large open area with a bunk shelf bed. The bed was on top and below was a cupboard and desk for my school stuff. I also had a large bookshelf with two beanbags next to it. My walls were coloured a pale green and the carpet a warm cream colour that brightened the room. At the far end of the room were a set of doors that let onto a wooden balcony overlooking the pool. “What do you want to do first then?” I asked Charlotte as I collapsed into one of the beanbag chairs. “Erm, I want to go swimming but my mum hasn’t brought my stuff yet.” She replied as she wandered around the balcony doors, staring out across the hills. She often did that when she was at my house. She loved the view of the town and it made her smile pleasantly to herself. “Wait here; I’ll go ask my daddy what time she’ll be here.” I replied as I lurched my body out of the beanbag chair and onto my feet. I quickly ran out of the room and headed down the stairs and into the kitchen area where I found my dad holding a mug of coffee while returning the phone to its charging stand. “Hey sweetie, that was Charlotte’s mother. She has had to go up to her mother’s because she’s ill so she can’t bring up Charlotte’s stuff. Will you be an angel and let her borrow some clothes?” My dad asked, before taking a sip of coffee as he leant back against the kitchen counter. “Sure daddy. When is dinner time?” I asked in response. “About 6 o’clock.” “Alright, Thanks daddy!” I said as I ran up and gave him a giant hug, making sure I squeezed as hard as I could. I smiled at him as he hugged me back and just as he let go of me I darted off back up the stairs and returned to my room. “Hey Charl, Your mum had to go your nana’s so you’ll have to borrow some of my clothes.” I said as I walked over to my wardrobe under my bed and began searching through for my swimming costume. “Alright but do you have a spare swimming costume? I really want to go swimming.” Charlotte asked pleadingly, her eyes looked at me worryingly. “Hang on, I’m looking now silly. I’m not sure I do though.” I replied as I began to pull hangers aside and search the bottom draws of the wardrobe. My heart began to sink as I failed to find any other costume except my own. “You don’t have a spare one do you?” Charlotte said with a despairing sigh. She walked over to the beanbags and slumped down onto one of them. Her body curled up in the beanbag chair, she looked to a point on the floor, and her face was quickly filled with sadness. “Alright, I have an idea! We don’t need any clothes.” I said triumphantly. As I suggested not wearing any clothes, I heard Charlotte burst out giggling on the beanbags. “DAISY! We can’t go out naked! Hehe, that’d be embarrassing!” she continued to laugh slightly with tears forming in her eyes and I joined in the laughter as I ran over to the beanbags and jumped up on top of her and began to tickle her all over. She started to scream and beg me to stop while laughing but I laughed menacingly as I persisted. She continued to laugh but started coughing in fits so I let her loose and watched her scramble off the beanbags and crash onto the floor of the bedroom and breathe deeply, desperate to try and catch her breathe back. I giggled to myself as I laid in the beanbag chair. I watched her sprawled out on the floor and giggled as she breathed in and out deeply. “Come on Charl, It’s only us two and we’re both girls.” “What about your dad? He’s a boy and my mum always told me I shouldn’t let boys see me naked anymore.” “It’s only my daddy though, he’s seen me naked thousands of times and it doesn’t bother me.” I could see her toying with the idea in her head, a large part of her desperate to go swimming but the uncertainty of been naked was largely putting her off and I could clearly see that. I sighed to myself and decided to be bold and try to convince her once and for all, as I was desperate to go swimming with my best friend. “If you want,… I’ll take of my clothes first.” I suggested and I saw her suddenly light up with reassurance. “Ok then.” She giggled slightly. “Go on. Get naked.” She said as she grinned at me antagonisingly. A part of me felt very nervous and regretted my proposal but I forced myself to slowly peel off my school blouse. Unlike a couple of the girls in my class, I didn’t need a bra yet and had no boobs but rather just soft nipples that always seemed to go hard and rigid when I was cold. I felt a breeze shift through the air, it blew gently against my now naked chest, and I shivered slightly as a strange sensation fluttered in my stomach. Charlotte saw on the floor and watched with her jaw slacked open in shock at the realisation that I was actually getting naked. I felt uneasy but continued to pull off my flat shoes and following, my white plaid socks. I felt my feet touch the soft fabric of the carpet and shivers kept coming, not from cold but rather from nerves. I looked Charlotte in the eye who sat there in the middle of the room grinning at me. Her smile silently cheered me on. I gave a shaky smile as I wrapped my finger and thumb in the hem of my grey skirt, I clumsily pulled it down my waist, and allowed it to drop to the floor. My sun yellow panties were the only form of clothing still left on my body and it was painfully obvious. The strange feelings in my stomach continued to flutter and send shivers up my spine. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath before quickly tugging down my panties and revealing my pussy (A word I had heard from older girls in school) in front of Charlotte. I heard her gasp as I pulled down my panties and stood with them at my ankles. My pussy boldly clear in front of her locked gaze. I started giggling to myself as I kicked my panties away from my ankles and stood there front of Charlotte completely naked. She sat there in the middle of the room completely awe struck, unable to move. I continued to grin at her and giggle as I walked up to her and kneelt down on my knees in front of her. I could see her looking up and down my body, her focus continually kept going down towards my pussy and every time she stared, I started to let out a soft giggle. I placed my hands on her shoulders and leant inwards as I said. “Stop staring at me you weirdo!” “Uh, um.. I’m, I’m sorry” she stuttered out. I could see her face turning a bright shade of red and all I could do was snigger and giggle even more. At the same time, I felt a strange sensation that tickled me slightly near my pussy but made me feel really good and funny in a strange way. “Come on then Charl, Let’s get your clothes of so we can go swimming” I said confidently. At this, I saw her eyes widen slightly and she looked slightly scared so I moved closer on my knees and gave her a hug, my naked body pushing up against the fabric of her school clothes. I could feel the fabric caress my body and it felt incredible so I held Charlotte even more tightly. Charlotte at first was still slightly stunned but she slowly embraced my hug and placed her arms tightly around me and I could feel her soft hands against my back. They were slightly cold and electrified shivers shot through my spine but they were not bad shivers, they just made the intense feelings down near my pussy feel even more exciting but I did not dare tell Charlotte. I decided to slowly ease up and let her go, When I moved back onto my knee’s in front of her she was once again smiling although, her face still coated with a shade of red. I told her to sit up and kneel in front of me and she did without any question. I then cautiously took hold of her school cardigan and began to unbutton the tiny little red buttons to expose her white polo shirt. I slid the cardigan off her and tossed it over to a corner of the room. Charlotte did not say anything but allowed me to further undress her. I told her to raise her arms, which she did, and it was then that I stood up and began to lift the crisp white polo shirt upward, firstly revealing her smooth flat stomach with a cute little belly button resting in the middle. I kept tugging upwards to further expose her flat chest with miniscule bumps where her boobies would be in a few years as mine would also be. As I was undressing Charlotte, I could feel the flutters increase and the sensations sparked continually and before I knew it, I could feel a pulsating between my legs and I could feel a slight heat radiate outwards and an overwhelming urge to touch my pussy. My face felt hot and I knew it was coated in a deep shade of red but I knew I was not embarrassed. I ignored the feelings and persevered with the task. I motioned for Charlotte to sit down with her bum on the floor in front of me. She slowly moved into position with her legs stretched outwards slightly spread to point that I could see up her skirt and see a pair of pink panties that I knew hid her own pussy, which I suddenly realised I desperately, wanted to see and I had no idea why. I kept looking up her skirt at her panties as I began to unfasten her shoes and roll off her socks. I felt my lips becoming dry so I licked them slowly to keep them moist as the anticipation began to kill me. With her shoes and socks gone, I told her to lift her bum so I could pull down her skirt. She lifted her bum of the ground using her hands behind her as support and I quickly grasped hold of the hem of her skirt and pulled slowly past her bum and down her legs, past her knees all the way to her ankles. Her body was slim and her skin was smooth yet soft to the touch as I brushed my hand all the way down her legs as I pulled her skirt. I glanced up slightly and saw her shiver slightly as she thrusted her hips forward at my touch and I swore she had begun to breathe much faster. I myself had held my breath as I stared at the last piece of clothing that covered my best friend’s pussy, which I wanted desperately to see for an unknown reason. My own pussy felt as though it was burning and the urge to touch it was overwhelming so cautiously, as Charlottes head was titled back looking upwards I brushed my hand against my pussy and began to itch it gently on top and round the edge of my pussy ‘lips’. I began to move my hand in small circular motions on top of my pussy and the feelings erupted between my legs as I felt my entire body shake mixed with an indescribable feeling that felt so good I thought I would pass out. I tried to hold my voice but I unwillingly let out a loud moan of what I could only describe as pure pleasure. I rubbed all the harder and during my ‘experience’ I crashed back against the floor on my back with my legs parted wide and my hand rubbing furiously, craving to make the feeling last as long as possible. I was breathing quickly and I knew I was letting out soft moans as I was rubbing. I let out a loud yelp as I suddenly felt another hand rub against my pussy, replacing my hand and I quickly looked up to see Charlotte on her stomach with one of her hands pushing and rubbing against my pussy and the other softly stroking my thigh. I thought my own hand was amazing, Charlotte’s was even better, the sensations continued to spiral through my body, and I helplessly bucked my hips into the air against Charlotte’s hand. I continued to pant and moan in pleasure until I pushed my hips up to far and I felt two of Charlottes fingers enter inside my pussy. My heart almost stopped as this happened, the feeling blew my mind and I could see stars flying around my head as the room span and became a blur. I began to moan even more loudly and I suddenly felt Charlotte’s hand cover my mouth to keep me quiet. I could feel her two fingers moving inside my pussy, pushing, twisting and moving quickly in and out as I thrusted and tossed uncontrollably underneath her touch. I opened my eyes and tried to look up but could not summon the strength to lift my head and I could only just see Charlotte as she laid there on the floor with her face covered in an expression of pleasure that was probably similar to mine. I could see one of her hands holding open my pussy as the other hand pushed in two fingers before pulling them out only to push them straight back in. I could also see Charlottes bum squeezing slightly and I assumed she was pushing her hips against the carpet to try to simulate the feelings she was giving me. I threw my head back against the floor again as I felt another wave of pleasure erupt at my pussy and I could feel it squeezing and pulsating around Charlottes fingers, trying desperately to hold them in like a ba with a dummy. I began to loudly moan again and this time instead of Charlotte placing her hand over my mouth she quickly moved her body over on top of mine and quickly brought her lips down onto mine and began to kiss me softly on the lips, just like boyfriends and girlfriends do. I was startled and immediately forgot all the pleasure I was feeling and was immediately alarmed but the overwhelming experience soon overcame my shock and I found myself kissing her back. My lips wrapping around hers and it was somewhat awkward but I think I was doing it right. Occasionally I could feel her lips lock on the tip of my tongue and it felt amazing, not as amazing as what she was doing to my pussy but amazing nether the less. I began to push my tongue out of my own mouth and into hers as we kissed. I felt her own wet tongue inside her mouth begin to push back and twizzle with mine. It was like a strange dance where our tongues interlocked and broke apart. I was in heaven and never wanted the feelings to end but to my despair; Charlotte broke the kiss and sat up on my stomach. I could feel wetness on my stomach from where her pussy was and I could see her panties were damp and I immediately panicked as I thought she had wet herself on me. I was about to throw her off before I noticed that my own pussy was drenched and something was dripping down onto the floor beneath me but I knew I had not peed myself so it must be something else! I decided to lay there as I watched her move backwards off my body and stare at me, her face reddening deeply as she covered her mouth in shock at what she had done. I laid there and simply stared at her with a faint grin across my face as I breathed in deeply, my bare chest rose and fell in quick rhythm while Charlotte just sat there with her jaw slacked open in horror. “I…. I.. I’m..-I’m so sorry.” She stuttered softly as tears began to form in her eyes. I felt my heart clench tightly in my chest and I could not stop myself from leaping up and embracing her in a deep hug. I held her tight against my naked body and I could feel her soft skin gently press against mine. She buried her head in my chest and sobbed softly. “It’s ok… Charl. It was great, please don’t cry” I said, trying to hold back tears of my own. I hated to see Charlotte upset and I would often always cry if she did. “Really?…” she sniffled without looking up at me. “Yeah! That was best feeling ever! It was awesome” I said reassuringly as I held her even more tightly against my body, she was shaking less now and I could tell my words were soothing her and calming her down. “Shall we just go swimming now?” I said as I stood up with Charlotte, who was still grasping onto my body. She moved back a little and stood opposite me with her arms on my shoulders and she sniffled before nodding twice gently. “But first! We need to take care of these!” “Take care of Wha-” she began to start but finished the sentence with a yelp as I quickly yanked down her soaked panties and threw them across the room amongst the other piles of clothes. I quickly ran out of the room with Charlotte in hot pursuit shouting for me to get back here and I just laughed hysterically as I ran down the stairs. I ran through the kitchen, almost slipping on the white tiled floor and quickly opened the back door that lead out onto the patio area that overlooked the hill and housed the pool in the middle. I looked back to see Charlotte storm out of the door and past her, my dad staring in surprise that we were naked. I laughed and looked forwards once more but screamed loudly as I realised I had approached the pools edge. I tried to stop myself but it was too late and I tipped over the pool edge and crashed into the water, performing a less than elegant belly flop. The water felt hard as it hit my chest and it hurt quite a lot so I panicked slightly as I sank straight to the bottom of the pool. I quickly gathered my senses and kicked up off the floor of the pool and surfaced, taking a deep breathe only to be smothered water once more as Charlotte landed with a cannon ball right next to me. I choked slightly as some of the water from the splash went into my mouth. Charlotte surfaced next to me; smiling once more, she quickly apologised but then clipped me on the head for earlier. I laughed as I grasped hold of her around her back and hugged her in the water. “Shall we play a game?” I asked casually as I held onto her. “Ok, what game?” She replied as she kept us both afloat in the heated water. I grinned devilishly as I replied ‘water tag’. I could see Charlotte was intrigued my grin but afraid to ask what the twist in this game was. I could also feel the fluttering butterfly’s in my stomach and the tense feeling in my pussy once again in anticipation for the game. “Daisy… why are you looking at me like that?” She asked nervously, preparing herself to bolt like a deer about to be chased a hungry lion. “Well,… this is water tag with a difference, the only place you can tag someone is…” I leant in even closer to her and whispered softly into her ear “their pussy.” She stared at me surprised at first but I saw her brow narrow and a mischievous grin I knew all too well form across her face, I should have predicted her next move but nothing could have prepared me for what her next move actually was. She quickly threw me off my grip off her and instant drove her hand down at my pussy and pressed against it roughly. I felt her hand rub from bottom to top as she yelled ‘Tag!’. I stood there in the pool in shock as I felt surges of electricity flow up my spine and my body felt extremely limp. I began to sink into the water slightly as the waves of pleasure flowed through me, just as the water did. The water from Charlotte swimming to the other side of the pool brought me back to reality and I realised that this game was on. It was payback time. I took a deep breath, dove under the water, and began to swim powerfully towards Charlotte; her pussy distorted from the ripple of the water around me but still looked wonderful. I was an excellent swimmer on account of been in the pool mostly every day, my dad kept saying I’d turn into a fish at this rate and it always made me giggle when he’d start making fish impressions in front of me. However, forget that, I had a more important mission at hand. I began to approach within reaching distance of Charlotte and it was at this moment that she saw me ripple through the water of the pool surface, her legs shot into action as she tried to dodge me but she had left it too late. I extended my reach, predicting her movements I gave a final push forwards and felt my hand encounter Charlotte’s soft pussy. As I made contact, Charlotte ceased to try to evade me and I felt myself cup her pussy in my hand, I could feel the softness of her skin, even through the wetness of the water. I held my hand there, gently rubbing the entire length of the pussy with the palm of my hand. I could feel my chest becoming tight so I rose steadily to the surface to come face to face with Charlotte. Her face was a deep red and her eyes looked heavy in their sockets. I could feel her warm breathe gasp quickly out across my bare chest as the water droplets dribbled slowly down my skin and back into the depths of the water. We were in the shallower end, so we could stand up with our heads just above the water, and we simply stood there staring at each other, my hand gently caressing her pussy. I decided to be more adventures and I gently inserted a finger into the folds of her pussy lips as she had done to me earlier. She let out a loud gasp and moan as her legs began to buckle beneath her and I had to push her back to the pool edge which she rested her body against for support as I probed her pussy with my finger. She was breathing even faster now, I added another finger to the inner tightness of her pussy, and I began to move inwards and out as she had done to me. She moaned loudly and I placed my other hand over her mouth to keep her quiet so my daddy would not hear us. I paused shortly to peer over the pool edge back towards the house, where we were, we were invisible from the windows view from the house, our height was too small to be seen over the pool edge. I sighed with relief as I continued my exploration and I slowly removed my hand from her mouth to replace it with my lips. I felt her pause for a moment and tense but soon her body relaxed and I experienced the same awkward kiss with her that we shared in my bedroom. She moaned into my mouth often and the vibrations tickled my lips and made me erupt into little giggle fits every now and again. Charlotte then surprised me pressing two of her own fingers against my pussy and began to stroke them up and down the exterior of my pussy lips. I moaned into her mouth as I pressed body up tightly against hers, forcing her fingers to enter the inner depths of my pussy. I could feel the sides of my pussy squeezing tightly around her fingers, as hers was against mine and my breathing escalated rapidly. I began to feel dizzy as constant electrified feelings were sent from my pussy, right across my body. The feeling was incredible and the feel of our tongues against each other only intensified the feelings. As if on cue, both our bodies went rigid and tense as a tidal wave of pleasure erupted from beneath us and we screamed into each other’s mouths as we both pushed each other’s hands deeply into the tightness of our pussies. I could feel something flow past my fingers as I slowly withdrew from her pussy. Something thicker than water but I could not make it out. I made a mental note I would find out what that stuff was later that came out of our pussies. My body fell against Charlotte’s body in the water, as I felt exhausted, all drops of energy soaked from my body. We would have sank right there if it was not for the pool edge that supported Charlotte. I breathed deeply as my body pressed against her. The water soothed and caressed us as we laid there for what seemed like eternity. Eternity had to end through as I heard my daddy shouting for us to come and get dried off. I pushed myself away from the edge of the pool and clumsily hoisted myself out of the pool, almost slipping as I struggled to maintain my strength. I sat on the pool edge with my feet in the water as I watched Charlotte come to the edge and attempt to pull her out. She struggled so I held my hands that she grasped but ended up losing grip with her other hand and ended up falling back into the water, dragging me with her. I arose to the surface laughing with Charlotte as we swam to the stairs instead of attempting to climb out. We lazily walked out of the water, our naked bodies glistening with water droplets in the setting sun. A gentle evening breeze flew up the across the hill and sent slight shivers down my spine as I felt cold. I could see Charlotte was also cold because her body was covered in small little goose bumps. We shivered slightly as we walked to the house where my dad was waiting with a hand full of towels. As we approached, my daddy looked a little uneasy and dopey, more than usual. It was as if he was off in another world, not entirely focused. I ignored it and happily took a towel from him and wrapped it around Charlotte who stood next to me. Water dripped slowly from her body to the floor of the patio and she smiled at me pleasantly as she snuggled up in the softness of the towel. I turned around and was quickly smothered my dad with a towel for me as he wrapped his arms around my body and hugged me tightly, brushing my body slightly on my arms to help dry me off quicker. I laughed as he tickled me through the towel and tried to get away from him but he would not let me go. He hoisted me up into the air and held me in his arms like a newborn ba, the towel flopped open to reveal my naked body to him and I noticed he glanced at my pussy for a moment. I went red with embarrassment but he just simply kissed me on the forehead and placed me back on the ground next to an awkward standing Charlotte. I giggled slightly as I wrapped the towel tightly around myself because I was getting even colder. “You two must be freezing, come on. I’ll put the fire on for you two so you can dry off” my daddy said to us as he held the door open, motioning for us to come inside. I went inside with Charlotte behind me and went into the soft-carpeted floor of the living room. The living room was one of the more old styled rooms of the house that had a soft fabric couch in the corner of the room with a chestnut coffee table and a TV opposite. In the middle of the room against the wall was a large dark fireplace that would light the entire room in a magnificent orange glow. In front of the fireplace were three cushion style chairs where you could curl up in front of the fire on cold winter nights. It was not winter yet but we needed to dry off and nothing was better than letting a fire dry your body. My dad started the gas fire and gently turned up the heat to a decent level and left the room in a hurry and went back upstairs; I just assumed he had to finish some work before dinner. So me and Charlotte just sat in the chairs with our towels open, exposing our bodies to the naked flame in front of us. It felt nice and relaxing as the heat stroked my body gently. I was still slightly cold as the remaining droplets ran down my body. I shivered slightly as I watched the flames dance in the fireplace against the fake charcoal rocks. I noticed Charlotte get up off her seat in the corner of my eye and she came over to my chair and told me to move up. I shifted my body to the side and she placed her towel down next to and partly on top of mine before sliding in next to me. She snuggled up against me and I could feel the warmth of the body heating me up quickly. She rested her head against my shoulder facing the fire and closed her eyes. I smiled to myself as I watched her peacefully lay against my body and I glanced down to her pussy and smiled to myself. We had discovered something so pleasure fulfilling and exciting today and it was only the beginning, we still had all night to go. I giggled softly to myself before kissing the side of Charlotte’s forehead softly and resting my own head against the top of hers, her damp hair cushioning the side of my face as I took one last look at the dancing flames before letting out a long lasting exhale of breathe and then, I closed my eyes. The End. ___________________________________________________________________________ I hope you enjoyed the story and remember constructive feedback; positive or negative is always appreciated as well as positive votes. 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